4.Closer

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**Two weeks later**

Denique's povNorbrook📍Saturday September

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Denique's pov
Norbrook📍
Saturday September

For the past two weeks Akeil and I have been getting closer we normally talk on the phone every night sometimes we both drop asleep on the call... He's very sweet.

Murdaa my subconscious laugh

Shhh!

Back to what I was saying before that little voice in my head rudely interrupt me.Akeil is 18 going to be 19 in March and his mom name is Aliyah.

Mhi hungry

Yuh Eva hungry a wah in a yuh belly suh likkle girl

Girl bye yah mn

..................

"Mhi Neva video call yuh fi see the ceiling if mhi did wah see ceiling mhi wouldn't call yuh mhi would a just look up in a mhi room"Akeil said making me laugh

"Mhi a do something dats y"I replied

"Set the phone suh mhi can see weh you a do"He instructed

I move towards the phone and did what he instructed.

"Pretty like money"he said with a smirk and I blush looking away

Akeil make denique deh yasso a blush tpc...murdaa

"Thanks I"I replied shyly

"So wah yuh plan fi do today"he asked

"Just wash and sleep"I responded

"Get ready by 8:30 tonight am bring you on a date and mhi nah ask a tell mhi a tell yuh"he said when he realize I was about to protest.

"Okay Akeil"I responded before rolling my eyes

"Soon make them roll fi something else"he said with smirk and I gasp

"Likkle boy bye"I said

"Alright nique remember 8:00 tonight"he said before hanging up

Some Gyal Neva yet go pon date my subconscious said

Shut up nuh mn

Mhi throw mhi corn mhi Neva call nuh fowl

No mn mhi tired and hungry in one.

...........
6:30pm

Getting up from my bed and walking to the bathroom fi guh whul a bath because a 6:30 now and Akeil always deh pon time.30 minutes later I was out of the bath tub and now drying my body.

I finished moisturizing my skin and was putting on my underwear....after I was finish getting dress looked a myself in my standing mirror.

I am wearing an artic blue bodycon dress with my brown bag and my white heels.simply and cute I didn't do any makeup so I just add some lip gloss to my lip.

Nuh wonder the Gyal Dem cah like yuh

Well well a gyal or boy doh have to like mhi!!

Cute nuh brute my subconscious I hype me up

Period!!.

Gonna send this in group chat even though I know moya and sash ago create one bag a excitement.I sent my picture and instantly messages started coming in.

R.O.D❤️💋 #1:boo yuh angle triangle dis!!😝😘

Me: period😂💙

R.O.D❤️😍#2: Bestie yuh nyam up the pic❤️

Me:Ate and left not even the grain😂❤️

That's why the Gyal Dem cah like yuh enuh😝

Mi kno mn but all they can do is hate from afar!!

R.O.D❤️💋#1:A weh you go young girl?

Me:Akeil said he's carrying me on a date😊

R.O.D❤️💋#1:aww tell mhi how it..come gwaan pon yuh date miss😂😂.

Me:kl muah💋

.........
7:50pm

It was now 7:50 and Akeil text mhi saying he is 3 minutes away.5 minutes later I heard the honk of a car I knew it's Akeil.Getting up and going downstairs I saw him leaning against his white BMW.

Him fresh ehh..fresh drop

White Amiri shirt with a black skinny jeans and black bank robber Clarks.

Walking towards the car heat rush my cheeks immediately.

"Te ves tan hermosa mami"he said in Spanish making blush even more.

Neva know the say the boy can speak Spanish

You got yourself a bright man denique my subconscious joke

He's not mhi man he's my friend

Well yuh soon to be then

"Gracias"I replied back in Spanish

He open the passenger door and take out a bouquet of roses and hand it to me.

So cute aww

Frighten Saturday yuh be Gyal my subconscious said

Mtchh... bruk vibes

He then open the passenger door and he closed it after I got situated in the seat.He walk around to the driver's side and start the car instantly bringing the engine alive.

"So a weh we a go"I asked

"When yuh reach yuh will see"he replied

"Okay"I said

After that little conversation we both sat in comfortable silence before he start playing wanted luv by chronic law.

Shit mhi nuh call Breanna and tell har.. Dialing her number immediately she pick up on the second ring.

"Brii am out on a date yere"I was first to speak

"Aii sissy poo remember fi send mhi the pictures and stay safe"she said

"Aii"I replied

"Cia we reach"Akeil said using my nickname.

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