Reworked 2023

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This story has now been reworked to fix some problematic parts. 

I was 17 when I conceptualized/began writing this story, I had some immature ideas of what was acceptable. 

Following changes have been made (with attempts to not spoil):

Nico's age is now 17, going on 18. This was a quick replace-word fix, sorry for any discrepancies. 

Explicit scenes before the Epilogue have been extremely watered down or entirely removed. The ones that remain for plot continuity were edited out to be less so; sorry if some of these transitions are rough. 

I know it's still questionable overall and I've thought about removing the story in it's entirety, but I've settled for these edits. 

If I've missed anything major please DM me (I probably won't see a comment mention) most of of this editing was done through searching key words in the original word doc and not a thorough re-write. 



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