Review & Winner of 'The Alchemy of Originality'

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GREETINGS FROM THE ALCHEMY TEAM,

SO NOW WE ARE TALKING ABOUT OUR ORIGINALITY AKA FICTION CATEGORY

JUDGE: @TheAlchemyAwards

1. Username: BellaArtz
Book: Keeper Of Demonic Forces.


Title of the book 5/5 (Loved the title)

Cover presentation 5/5 (the cover is amazing)Blurb 9/10 (One of the best blurb with good mix of short intro and engaging topics. Good work)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (Loved the opening scene with vivid description of the book plot)Grammar 8/10 (Good)Plot Twists 8/10 (Good)Vocabularies 7.5/10 (Good, you can do better)Dialogues Deliveries 7/10 (Good)Character Narrations 9/10 (Good)Story Development 9/10 (Good)Overall 8.5/10 (Good work)

Total: 85/100


2. Username : Kathy_Marwin
Book name : Five Sisters, Warriors of Finella


Title of the book 5/5 (The title is really good)

Cover presentation 3.5/5 (maybe you can use a little better graphics covers to attract more readers)Blurb 7.5/10 (Crisp, but lack of the hooking factor)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Good work there)Grammar 8/10 (Okay)Plot Twists 6.5/10 (not much with twist and turns. But is good for a children's fiction)Vocabularies7/10 (okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Good)Character Narrations 7/10 (Okay)Story Development 8.5/10 (Nicely done)Overall 7.5/10 (Good)

Total: 76.5/100


3. Username: romance_lover16

Title: Freeing Anvi


Title of the book 4/5 (Nice title)

Cover presentation 4/5 (Cover is amazing tho. But maybe a little too much. You can use better described cover for this amazing book )Blurb 8/10 (Nice)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Good with descriptive plots)Grammar 8/10 (okay)Plot Twists 8/10 (Nicely done)Vocabularies 7/10 (Could've been better)Dialogues Deliveries 9/10 (Loved it)Character Narrations 7.5/10 (Good)Story Development 8/10 (Good)Overall 8/10 (Good)

Total: 79.5/100


4. Username: AnnamitaMuscaria
Title: Hell is an Empty Heart

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