Review & Winner of 'The Alchemy of Verse'

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GREETINGS FROM THE ALCHEMY TEAM, 

THE NEXT CATEGORY IS RIGHT HERE. 

JUDGE:  cassiecrawford067

 1. Username: Poppy_Rusert
Title: A Diary of a Girl

Title - 3/5 [Title is good but it's more about love, so it doesn't tell everything about the girl, it could've been "A love diary of a girl." As it focus more on love.]

Cover - 4/5 [Cover is excellent]Blurb - 7/10 [Blurb is okay, it could've been a bit more effective]Opening poetry/Art work - 8/10[Poem opening was marvelous, it could've been much better with a bit work]Grammar - 8/10 [Grammar was absolutely stunning]Message provided through your work - 5/5 [Amazing message provided]Rhyming/color combination of work - 7/10 [Rhyme scheme was beautifully penned, few things looks kinda repetitive]Total word use/Total art work - 8/10 [word use was very good, it lacks diversity]Progress - 8/10 [It has such a good progress]

Total - 58/70


2. Username: Tremar_Ivey

Title: Poeticcharmer

Title - 3/5 [Title is okay, but as it doesn't charm much it could've been something else]

 Cover - 4/5 [I personally like the cover]Blurb - 8/10 [Blurb is good]Opening poetry/Art work - 8/10[Poem opening was astonishing, feelings were strong]Grammar - 8/10 [Grammar is good]Message provided through your work - 5/5 [We can see the journey of the poet and enjoy it]Rhyming/color combination of work - 6/10 [Better Rhyme scheme maybe used]Total word use/Total art work - 7/10 [word use can be more effective]Progress - 8/10 [It has good progress] 

Total - 57/70


3. Username: TessaYoung5

Title: Mismatch Flame

Title - 5/5 [Title was well explained and I liked it a lot]

Cover - 3/5 [cover was good but it could've been more effective with good graphics]Blurb - 9/10 [Blurb is awesome]Opening poetry/Art work - 9/10[Poem opening was romantic and good]Grammar - 8/10 [Grammar is good]Message provided through your work - 3/5 [We can sense the love in this poem and it's good]Rhyming/color combination of work - 7/10 [color combination was good]Total word use/Total art work - 8/10 [choice of words were really masterpiece ]Progress - 7/10 [Its progress is fine] 

Total - 59/70


4. Username: Nila__Phillips

Title: Poetry My Dear/ Poems for the Lost Soul

Title - 4/5 [It's a pretty good title name for the poem with adequate appropriation.]
Cover - 4/5 [Cover is catchy]
Blurb - 8/10 [Blurb is effective]
Opening poetry/Art work - 6/10[It starts with a good question, it would even great with a little more work]
Grammar - 7/10 [Grammar was amazing ]
Message provided through your work - 4/5 [It makes a point clear that life is unpredictable]
Rhyming/color combination of work - 6/10 [Rhyme scheme could be chosen more wisely]
Total word use/Total art work - 8/10 [word use was great, a little more emotion could've been Great]
Progress - 9/10 [progress was beautifully shown and written] 

Total - 56/70


AND NOW, IT IS TIME TO ANNOUNCE THE WINNERS. 

OUR 1ST WINNER 

&

THE ALCHEMY BOOK OF THE YEAR, IN VERSE CATEGORY IS

MISSMATCHED FLAMES BY TessaYoung5

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!

AND NOW, OUR 2ND WINNER IS 

THE DIARY OF A GIRL BY Poppy_Rusert

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!


AND NOW IS THE TIME FOR OUR RUNNER UP!

ITS POETICCHARMER BY Tremar_Ivey


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