Review & Winner of 'The Alchemy of Tales'

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GREETINGS FOR THE ALCEHMEY TEAM.

THE RESULT OF THE NEXT CATEGORY IS HERE. 

JUDGE: Poppy_Rusert

1. Username : Kathy_Marwin
Book name : One More Highschool Comedy, Chaos Begins

Title of the book4.5/5 (The names suits with the book)

Cover presentation 3.5/5 (could have been better. The cover is the first thing to notice in a book)Blurb 8.5/10 (quite catchy and engageable)The Opening Chapter 8/10 (Give a good view about the book)Grammar7.5/10 (need editing I guess)Plot Twists 8/10 ( It's nicely adjusted with comedy scenes and adventure)Vocabularies 6.5/10 (Could've been better)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Nice)Character Narrations 9/10 (Nicely done)Story Development 9/10 (Liked it)Overall 8.5/10

Total: 72/100


2. Username: @Tremar_Ivey
Title: Operation: Spilled


Title of the book4.5/5 (The name is unique)
Cover presentation 3.5/5 (could have been better. Try using some more suspense)

Blurb 8/10 (short but engageable)

The Opening Chapter 8.5/10 (Give a good view about the book)

Grammar7/10 (need editing and spell check)

Plot Twists 5/10 (isn't completed, and only with 3 chapters, so it is hard to judge in this criteria)

Vocabularies 6/10 (Could've use better)

Dialogues Deliveries 7/10 (okay)

Character Narrations 5/10 (Not yet completed)

Story Development 5/10 (NA)
Overall 6.5/10

Total: 66/100


3. Username: @BellOfSilence

Title: The Lost Boys of London

Title of the book5/5 (loved it)

Cover presentation4/5 (Could've been better)Blurb 9.5/10 ( a perfect nostalgia with Peter Pan but with a twist)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (Nicely done)Grammar 8/10 (okay)Plot Twists 9/10 (the suspense is high and it is really awesome to read)Vocabularies 7/10 (Could've used more profound vocabularies)Dialogues Deliveries 9/10 (Good)Character Narrations 9.5/10 (Loved it)Story Development 9/10 (super)Overall 9/10

Total: 88/100


4. Username: @craftychicken
Title: The Things They never Told Me.


Title of the book 4/5 (I personally feel this book is underrated and need attention asap. I remember I use to write these when I was 13. But joke aside, the title need a polish for this awesome book)

Cover presentation 3/5 (Try to keep something realistic and goes with the plot)Blurb 8/10(loved it)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (each chapter need separate fanbase for the thoughts)Grammar 7/10 (need to work)Plot Twists 6/10 (None)Vocabularies 8/10 (Okay)Dialogues Deliveries 8/10 (Good)Character Narrations 6/10 (None)Story Development 9/10 (great work)Overall 7.5/10

Total: 67.5/100


5. Username: @ScribbleYourThoughts
Title: Sunshine & Shadows


Title of the book 5/5 (awesome)Cover presentation 5/5 (awesome)Blurb 8/10 (good)The Opening Chapter 9/10 (author did a good job there, with the narration and plot)Grammar 8/10 (good)Plot Twists 7/10 (okay)Vocabularies 8/10 (okay)Dialogues Deliveries  9/10 (Nicely done)Character Narrations 7/10 (okay)Story Development 8/10Overall 8/10 (good)

Total: 82/100


THE 1ST WINNER 

&

 THE ALCHEMY BOOK OF THE YEAR IN TALES CATEGORY IS

THE LOST BOYS OF LONDON BY @BellOfSilence

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!


2nd WINNER IS

SUNSHINE & SHADOWS BY @ScribbleYourThoughts

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!


AND OUR RUNNER UP IS 

ONE MORE, HIGHSCHOOL COMEDY, CHAOS BEGIN BY Kathy_Marwin

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR!!!



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