pyar ki kahani. (Completed)

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Shiva : raavi tujhko hurt nhi krna chahta tha, pr kya krta, us waqt aur kuch smjh nhi aya,...

Raavi puts her hand on his mouth : bs Shiva, purani baate bhul jate hai,ab hm sath hai aur bs yhi sach hai,...and thank you mujhe ye sb btane ke liye, wrna mujhe kbhi pta hi nhi chalta ki jo Shiva bahar se  itna sakht hai wo andar se itna maasum hai ki kisi aur ko drd na ho isliye khud ko itni tklif de skta hai
Ye sb janne ke baad na,  mujhe tujhse aur bhi jyada pyar ho gaya hai,...kayal ho gayi hu Mai teri

Shiva get tearful eyes : raavi,I love u
Raavi : I love u too Shiva (hugging him tightly)

Her hand on his back shoulder her head on his chest ,his hand on her waist and head in crook of her neck

They are lost in each other embrace
(Imagine any song for the moment according to your choice)

After sometime 

Someone knocks at the door

They break the hug
Raavi : av kaun aya hoga
Shiva : khi Kiara to nhi
Raavi : nhi, wo to sangeet me busy hogi
Again the person knocks
Shiva : ja ,ja kr dekh
Raavi : pr tujhe kisi ne dekh liya to
Shiva : kuch nhi hoga ,tu door khol to
Raavi opened the door and it's varun

Varun : tu yha kya kr rhi hai raavi, wha function me sb dhund rhe hai tujhe
Raavi : wo, ..mere sir me drd ho rha tha, isliye yha aa gayi
Varun : tu thk to hai, mai medicine de deta hu andar chal
Raavi : nhi,  maine medicine le liya hai, thoda rest krungi to thk ho jaungi
Varun : acha thk hai ,mai tere sath rukta hu

He tries to get inside

Raavi : nhii...tum...jao...mai thk hu
Varun : pr....he peeks inside bt can't see anyone as shiva has hide himself

Varun in mind : raavi sach bol rhi hai ya jhut, khi wo shiva ke sath to nhi,...pr yha koi dikh hi nhi rha hai

Raavi : tum andar kya dekh rhe ho, jao na , mujhe rest krna hai
Varun : acha thk hai, pr agr koi jrurt jo to mujhe bta dena
Raavi : ok
He leaves
Raavi : bach gaye , agr isne shiva ko dekh liya hota to pta nhi kaise react krta,...
Looking around : pr shiv kaha chla gaya

Shiva hugs him from back

Raavi : kaha the tum,mai to dar hi gayi thi
Shiva: yhi tha , chup gaya tha taki koi dekh na paye,...waise ye varun kya bol rha tha

Raavi : kuch nhi mai dikhi nhi isliye fikr kr rha tha
Shiva : ise kuch jyada hi fikr nhi hoti hai tumhari...
Raavi : wo mere bachpan ka frnd hai to thoda concerned hai bs...
Shiva : haa,wo to dikh hi rha hai,...kitna concerned hai (sarcastically)

Raavi : tum aise kyu react kr rhe ho
Shiva : kuch nhi,..pr tumhe nhi lgta ki ye varun waisa nhi hai jaisa dikhata hai
Raavi : kya bol rhe ho tum shiva,  ..aisa kuch nhi hai,..wo bht acha hai
Shiva  : yhi to problem hai na ki tu khud
Itni achi hai ki tujhe sb ache hi najar aate hai...

Raavi : kya bol rha hai tu....
Shiva : kuch nhi jane de,..acha ab mai chalta hu isse pehle ki koi aur aa jaye,...tu rest kr

Raavi smiles
Shiva leaves

Next day
In morning
Kiara : raavi kaha gayab ho gayi thi tu kal,..
Raavi : mai ...mai to  yhi thi
Kiara : pr dance performance ke baad to tu khi dikhi hi nhi,...khi shiva ke sath romance to nhi kr rhi thi (teasing )
Raavi blushes: kya bakwas kr rhi hai tu....
Kiara : acha, rehne de mujhe mt sikha,
sb smjh me aata hai mujhe

Raavi : tu na apni shadi pe dhyan de
Kiara : shadi se yaad aya ,Karan ke jutte tujhe hi churane hai,...tune kuch socha hai
Raavi : isme sochne ka kya hai

Kiara : tujhe kya lgta hai Karan samne se aa kr apne jutte de dega ...itna aasan nhi hoga
Raavi : tu fikr kyu krti hai,..bs dekhti ja mai kya krti hu

On the other side
Karan: dekh shiva, ye teri jimmedari hai, mere jutte unke hath nhi lgne chahiye
Shiva : arey jutte hi to hai, itna presan  kyu ho rha hai

Karan : pta nhi jutta ke badle kya mangegi wo, ..pocket to meri khali hogi na aur upar se Kiara se shart lgi hai , naked kat jaegi meri,...plss yaar,..bs tere hi bharose hu
Shiva : haa, haa, thk hai,...smbhal.lunga mai

Everyone gets ready in wedding attire
Rituals starts
Karan opens his shoes to sit for var puja

Raavi is looking at it
Shiva opens his shoes and wear karan's

Raavi in mind : arey isne to jutte pehen liye ,ab mai churaungi kaise,...kuch to krna hoga
Raavi goes near shiva

Shiva looks at her and is lost in her beauty

Raavi : aise kya dekh rha hai
Shiva : dekh rha hu ki aj Chand jamin pr kaise
Raavi blush : waise tu bhi bht handsome lg rha hai
Shiva : wo to mai hmesa hi lgta hu,  aise hi thodi na saari ladkiya mrti hai mujh pr( teasing)

Raavi : jyada hawa me mt udd,  itna bhi acha nhi lg rha hai ..(making faces)
Shiva : jalan ho rhi hai
Raavi : mai kyu jalungi,...mai kuch kam hu kya ,ek baar ishara kru na to ladko ki line lg jaegi
Shiva : un sbko maar maar kr bharta
nhi bna dunga (angrily)

Raavi : ab kaun jal rha hai
Shiva : haa, jal rha hu mai bs,..khabardar jo dubara aisi baat ki to..

Raavi  pulling his nose playfully : awwww, mera khadus,jalkukra bn gaya

Shiva makes faces in anger.

Raavi : acha baba sorryyy,   nhi krungi aisi baat bs...
Shiva smiles
Raavi looking at the shoes : acha shiva mere sath chal na
Shiva : kaha, shadi shuru hone wali hai ,sb yhi hai
Raavi : tu chal to shi
Raavi takes him to the puja room
Shiva : tu mujhe yha kyu layi hai

Raavi : is kamre me na puja ki sari chije hai,  uncle ne kuch saman laane ko kaha tha, isliye

Raavi opens her sandal and get inside the room.
Raavi : tu bahar kyu khada hai, aa na
Shiva was about to get inside
Raavi : jutte khol kr aa, yha puja ki chije hai
Shiva : nhi phr rehne de mai bahar hi thk hu, tujhe jo lena hai jldi le aur chal
Raavi in mind : ye aise nhi maanega
She act as searching for something qnd climbs on a tool and intentionally falls down
Raavi : aahhh
Shiva looks her : raavi kya hua,

Raavi : aahhh, shivaa
Shiva opens his shoes and run inside

Shiva holds raavi from arms : raavi, tu thk to hai na,...kya jrurt thi tool pr chalne ki,..mujhe bol deti
Raavi : maine to tujhe andar aane bola tha, pr tu hi nhi aaya
Shiva : wo sb chod , aur dikha kaha lgi

He checks her around to see where she is hurt

Raavi holds her hand: yha lgi hai

Shiva look at her hand : kaha ,dikha, jyada drd ho rha hai kya
Raavi smiles inside seeing his care

While shiva is busy looking where she is hurt she pulls him and make  him fall
She hurriedly stands up and run
towards the door

Shiva : ye kya tha, tujhe to lgi thi na
Raavi : nhi,  mujhe to ye jutte lene the (picking up the shoes),...
Shiva : mtlb tune jhut bola
Raavi : aur kya krti ,sidhe se to tu deta nhi
Shiva standing up : tu ruk av btata hu tujhe
Raavi : pehle pakad to...
She runs to the wedding hall
Shiva runs after her...
Shiva : ruk ja ,jutte de
Raavi : ab to ye nhi milenge
Raavi reach the hall and shiva after her
Radha see them : raavi , ye kya ho rha hai...??

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