propose day =bad day?

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At morning

At breakfast table
Susheela: humesha late hota h tumhari wajah se chalo jaldi milk bread finish karo you are getting late for school alina
Alina: zjsbsbsjznvxhd
Susheela: pehle muh ka finish karo tab baat karna
Alina: yeh bol rahi hu ki jitna ho sakta h utna kha rahi hu jalfi jaldi
Pramod laughs
Sushlina: tum/aap kyu huse
Pramod: tum dono ki cute fight dekh ke chalo jaldi khalo alina school jana h fir
Pramod: susheela aaj kuch important case h isliye tum hi le aana alina ko school se mom dad bhar gaye h warna wo le aate
Susheela: koi baat nahi main le aaungi isko..... Waise tumhe kab jaana h hospital
Pramod: 1 pm
Susheela: daily toh 9 baje jate ho
Pramod: are aaj jo case h wo ussi time h isliye
Alina: chale papa
Pramod: ha chalo
Alina: bye mumma
Susheela: take your tiffin
Alina: sorry bye
Susheela: bye

At school
Pramod: bye alina ab chup chap apni class main jao no shaitani
Alina: ok papa bye
Pramod: bye
Alina: jao na
Pramod: pehle aap andar jao
Alina in mind: mai apni bff ke bina kaise jao andar wo aane wali h acting karti hu
Ok papa ja rahi hu
She goes inside pramod leaves and she came out again and waiting for her best friend
She saw her bff crosing the road and a car is coming from behind...she shouts but she didnt listen at last when car came close to her she push her bff and came in front of car

At home
Pramod came back
Pramod: sushi sushiiii
Susheela: aa rahi ho bolo
Pramod: came here
Susheela: ha bolo kya hua kyu chila rahe ho
Pramod: actually....... He sit on knees take out a ring in front of her
Pramod: mana ki humari shaadi ho chuki h but fir bhi i love you and will you be my wife
Susheela: i am already yours pramod
Pramod makes her wear that ring: happy propose day jaana
Susheela: same to you jaan and love you to
Both came closer but pramod phone rings
Pramod: aree yaar kiska call h....... Alina ke school se h
Susheela: par abhi toh 10 hi baje h fir kyu call aa raha kahi kuch kaand toh nahi kar diya isne
At call
Pramod: hello pramod chautala alina's father
Class teacher = ct
Ct: sur actually aapki beti ka accident ho gya h
Pramod: whattt kaise kab mai toh use khud chodke aaya tha or agar yeh mazaak h mam toh plzz stop it (in full anger and loud voice)
Susheela: kya hua kyu chila rahe ho
Ct: sir mai kyu mazaak karungi aap city hospital aa jaiye wahi admit h wo
Pramod: main.... Mai abhi aata hu wait
Call end
Susheela: kya hua h pramod tum itna chila rahe the or kaha ja rahe ho
Pramod: al... Al...alina... Alina ka.... Wo
Susheela tensed: pramod mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi h batao kya hua h
Pramod: alina ka accident ho gya hospital jaana h jalfi
Susheela: whatt jaldi chalo

At hospital

Pramod: mam alina kaunse cabin main h
Receptionist: sir aap kaun kauna alina
Ct: aree sir mam aap aa gye mere saath chaliye udhar h alina
Susheela: jaldi chalo
In room
Dr: mam you cant enter in room she is in ot operation is going on
Sumod: operation?
Dr: yes mam actually blodd loss hua h isliye or blood bhi chahiye otherwise......
Pramod: mera... Mera or alina ka same blood group h Meflra blood le lijiye
Dr: ok come with me
Pramod: susheela i am coming itne dp ji or sab aa jayenge
Susheela: hmm
He leavs and both family came
Susheela: garima (runs and hug her and statrs crying)
Garima: shh..... Shant ho ja bus chup
Susheela: ali... Ali.. Ko kuch nahi hoga n
Agni: na susheela bhai manti h na toh bharosa rakh kuch nahi hoga usse
Susheela: jijuuu ( hugs agni and starts crying)
Dp: na chori mat ro
Minni: ha susheela plzz tum tut jaogi toh pramod ko kaun sambhalega
Jay: waise yeh h kaha
Susheela: bloo... Blood dena gaya h
Dr came
Susheela runs there
Susheela: kaisi h wo
Dr: kehna mushkil h shayad hi wo
Susheela sit in knees and start crying dr leavs and pramod came
Susheela hugs him and cries a lot
Pramod: kya hua susheela
Susheela: dr... Dr... Ne bola ali... Shayaf hi....cries.....
Pramod: shhh... Bus kuch nahi hoga usse wo tumhari beti h strong h nothing will happen
Susheela: crying and faints
Pramod: susheela... Susheela.... Susheela
Kya hua
Garima: ro ro ke behosh hogayi isse yehe bithao main iske liye juice lati hu
Agni: garima tum yahi raho main jata hu
Garima: hmmm

After a long

Dr came
Sumod run their
Pramod: how is she dr
Dr: amm..... operation successful and she is a fighter Warna bhot kam cases h aise
Susheela: thank god can we meet h
Dr: ya sure you can
Sumod go inside and sit beside her
Alina: mumma papa aa gye aap dono
Pramod: hmm..... Par tumhe chot kaise lagi main toh tumhe school ke andar chod ke gaya tha na
Alina: ab gussa mat karna par maine andar jaana ka natak kiya tha kyunki meri bff aane wali thi na uska wait karrahi thi or jab vo road cross karne lagi toh ek car aayi or usse bachane ke liye maine usse push kiya par mere hi lag gayi or mumma ne sikhaya ki always help people
Pramod: its ok par dhyaan rakhna tha na
Alina: mumma aap kyu nahi bol rahe kuch
Susheela: main tih yeh dekh rahi hu ki meri pyaari beti ne apne papa ke alaawa kuch toh mujhse sikha h
Alina: yeh toh h but i love you
Susheela: love you to
Alina: ab ghar jaana h yaha bhot boring h
Pramod: chalenge par raat ko abhi nahi abhi aapko yahi rehna h
A couple enter in the room
Alina's friend mumma = afm
Alina's friend papa = afp
Both: alina yeh flowers and chocolates for you
Alina: par aunty why
Pramod to susheela in low voice: kaun h yeh
Susheela: mr and mrs shankar alina ki bff ke parents
Pramod: ohk
Afp: thank you tumne humari beti ko bachaya na us car se isliye
Alina: uncle wo meri best friend h so uske liye no thank you no sorry and thanks for this
Afm: ok take rest byee
Alina: byee
Chautala's and ruhail's came
Alina: dadu dadi nanu nani mamu badi mummy bade papa aap sab uff naame leke thak gayi
All laugh
Dp: na chori kaisi h tu
Alina: nanu fit and fine
Kusum: beta apna dhyaan rakha karo
Alina: ok nani from next time
Minni: dekho  mai or dadu tumhare liye chocolates laaye h get well soon
Alina: thank you
Puttu: see alina my fans are waiting for you
Alina: hi everybody
Pramod: chalo you take rest mai discharge papers laata hu
All: ha chalo sab
Alina: aree ruko mera matlab jao par bade papa badi mummy aap yahi ruko
Agnima: par kyu
Alina:  aree ruko toh
Evryone leaves agnima there
Agni: bolo beta kya hua
Alina: mujhe aap dono se baat karni thi
Garima: ha bolo kya baat h
Alina: mai aapse gussa hu
Agnima: par humne kya kiya
Alina: aap dono relative ke gaye or mujhe bhul hi gayi dekho ek call bhi nahi ki or waise alina beta alina beta karte ho
Agni: sorry meri maa actually waha bhot busy the isliye par next time se pakka aisa nahi hoga
Alina: ......
Agnima stand and start doing uthak baithak while holding their ears
Agnima: sorry 1 sorry 2 sorry 3 sorry 4 sorry 5
Alina: are bus bus maaf kar diya yeh kya kar rahe ho aap
Agni: toh rani ne hume maaf kar diya iske liye unka bhot bhot shukriya
Alina laugh: bus bade papa
Garima: chalo tum rest karo fir ghar chalte h ok
Alina: okhhhh
   

Target: 40
Pre: chocolate day
Word count: 1317

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