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Fɪʀsᴛ Pʟᴀᴄᴇ 🥇 : taebear2930

Boy From The countryside

𝙏𝙞𝙩𝙡𝙚 [04/05]
It is eye-catchy and fits the storyline.

𝘾𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧 [05/05]
I love Jungkook's visual in it. It was edited nicely. Perfect.

𝘽𝙡𝙪𝙧𝙗 [04/05]
The starting of the story is nice. Wise word use, and well explained

𝙁𝙞𝙧𝙨𝙩 𝙄𝙢𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 [18/20]
I want to know where the story is going. I like the thyme and the description. When you read the first chapter you will find the interest to read more. Good job.

𝙋𝙡𝙤𝙩 [18/20]
The plot is not too cliche but not new either. It is nice and has its own uniqueness. I like it.

𝙁𝙡𝙤𝙬𝙨 [09/10]
It doesn't rush too much and flow nicely. I would recommend adding a little more detail on some parts. It would help to interest the reader more. But overall it is nice already.

𝙀𝙢𝙤𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨 [08/10]
I can feel the emotion perfectly. It's nice. I smile most of the time.

𝙂𝙧𝙖𝙢𝙢𝙖𝙧 & 𝙑𝙤𝙡𝙘𝙖𝙗𝙪𝙡𝙖𝙧𝙮 [09/10]
Good grammar. Simple use of the word. Easy to understand.

𝘾𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙙𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩 [08/10]
I like how Taehyung's character grows from a Richy rich boy to a soft lovable boyfriend. It is well written. Good job.

𝙊𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙖𝙡𝙡 [04/05]
The story is good. I like it. Keep going. Keep writing. You will become better.

𝙍𝙚𝙨𝙪𝙡𝙩𝙨 [87/100]

Pʀɪᴢᴇs : -
☞︎︎︎ 15 𝙛𝙤𝙡𝙡𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙪𝙨
☞︎𝘼 𝙣𝙞𝙘𝙚 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩-𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙤𝙣 𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙢𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙖𝙜𝙚 𝙗𝙤𝙖𝙧𝙙.
☞︎︎︎︎3 𝘼𝙘𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙩 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙫𝙤𝙩𝙚 𝙤𝙣 𝙖 𝙗𝙤𝙤𝙠 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙞𝙨𝙝 𝙛𝙤𝙧.
☞︎︎𝙔𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙗𝙤𝙤𝙠 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙗𝙚 𝙖𝙙𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙡𝙞𝙨𝙩.

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Sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ Pʟᴀᴄᴇ 🥈 : yuki_1997

Blue neighborhood.

𝙏𝙞𝙩𝙡𝙚 [04/05]
the title matches the story, yes, but it's not eye-catching enough.

𝘾𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧 [03/05]
good editing. But I think it's will be better if you take some real moment to be a cover. It will make the reader more interested to read.

𝘽𝙡𝙪𝙧𝙗 [04/05]
the explanation, metaphor used is good but not perfect. Sometimes I need to read twice to understand but the explanation really makes the reader curious and mad at the same time.