This OC belongs to dreamcloudofstarclan
Since this is a troll OC, I will be giving tips to make it a more horrendous abomination then it already is.
I'm not very good at this lol.
Name: Awesomebeauty
Hmm, a bit on the nose, but of course in this sort of fanfiction subtlety is nonexistent.
Honestly, I can't think of anything worse than this lol.
Gender: She-Cat
All right.
Rank: Queen of the Forest!
Forest? Is that enough? No, she needs to be Queen of more than that, maybe add Twolegplace into her sphere of influence, as well as any tribe cats or rogues or loners that happen to wander around!
Age: 5 million moons
But she still hasn't aged a day since her warrior ceremony!
(All though, maybe make them just say that rather than actually writing it lol, since most all of her original clanmates would've passed.)
Or you could go the other route of her becoming leader at like 2 moons. That would also be horrible.
Clan: ClanClan, or as I like to call it, CalnCaln-Cats who fly around on their tails snorting like donkeys
I just snorted like a donkey reading that monstrosity of a sentence. I mean... it's awful? So, good?
It may be a bit too much, though. Maybe tone it down a little bit so you don't get too overwhelmed by the craziness-- or maybe make all of the other cats super useless, and Awesomebeauty's the only amazing one. Side characters only exist to fall in love with her.
Also, a quick tip: Misspellings are important in this type of story, BUT if you write them too much, it's impossible to read. Do it like this:
Starshine livved in the most perfectest clan in all off the forrest. She was an amasing leader. All off the cat looked up to her beutiyfulness and they wer all in lov with her. Star star was a good fihter to. She was better than all off the oter Caln cats for sure butter frens were all jelllos.
Not like this:
Strshie livved inn thee bestt3st caln inall off the forrest. Sh wass in best leaader. catts thoht shee wass real beautifyully andd alll of themm weri inn lov wit her. star star star wass an godo fihter to. she was beter than al off oter caln cat forr surre butter frens were all jellos.
The first one is absolutely abominable, but you can read it. The second one takes a lot of work though-- both to read and write. More so when it's a whole chapter.
Appearance: Beautiful rainbow cat with blue eyes.
bLuE EyEs? BuT ShE shOulD haVe RaiNbow eYes or PurplE OneS?
Appropriate lol.
Personality: She believes herself to be very very nice and tomboyish shown when watching My Little Pony and killing everyone!
Is she not like other she-cats too? Is she said to be absolutely amazing and intelligent while not actually any of these things? Is she absolutely drop-dead gorgeous? If so, then you've got yourselves... bad. Bad, bad.... badness. It's also never her fault that she killed anyone, of course! It was all their fault and she's cool for doing it!
(P.S although hilarious, the MLP thing may be a bit too much, unless you abruptly put in some Twoleg dropping a TV. You could do that! It would still be really nonsensical, but not so much that my brain hurts and I give up for my sanity-- though I may not have any left at this point.)
Backstory: She appeared out of nowhere, and killed her Clanmates for fun. The Clanmates thanked her for killing them even when they were dead. She also killed evil dudes because she's bored. Now she sits around watching My Little Pony!
My brain hurts. Thinking is not working. Also, she needs an unnecessarily tragic death where she actually isn't dead and comes back so she gets sYmPaThy PoInTs.
Family: None. She appeared out of nowhere
Ah. Maybe from a shoting staar?
Likes: Killing cats, watching My Little Pony
Nothing personality-wise here, so it's good!
Dislikes: Not being able to kill someone, not being able to watch My Little Pony
Very nice and shallow.
In conclusion, see the first two sentences I wrote about the backstory. I need to go recover my sanity.
(Yes, she is a good troll character lol! Sounds like it's going to be fun to write her story.)
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