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I'm fairly certain I've seen this name before, but I can't place it. Anyways, I really like the sound of this! The only thing is that I can't quite figure out why he got the suffix -Flame. Usually, fire-themed suffix are exclusive to cats with a more outgoing, friendly personality.
Maybe these suffixes would fit him better::
Tigercloud or Tigerfeather; Tigerfall or Tigershade; Tigerwhisper or Tigerdove
(That last one is, admittedly, a bit odd and doesn't flow well, but it does fit with his peaceful personality.)
Gender┃ Tom (pronouns: he/they)
All right!
Age┃ 6 moons currently (He's currently an apprentice)
He just became an apprentice, then! He's the equivalent of only ten years old.
Clan┃ Dawnclan (a wooded area with a small lake and river running through it) (Loner, formerly)
8 out of 10
I really like the name DawnClan! (By the way, what do you mean by 'Loner, formerly?')
One thing to note is that in canon, names are capitalised like this :: DawnClan; ThunderClan, WindClan.
Does their territory look a bit like this, maybe?
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Rank┃ Warrior
Makes sense.
Appearance┃ Dark brown tabby with grey eyes and white paws
13 out of 15
There's nothing initially wrong with this appearance, but coupling dark tabby with Tiger- makes it resemble someone a little too closely.
To distinguish him from the notable canon cat with the same prefix, maybe make him a patched tabby, or a lighter brown tabby.
He is genetically accurate, though!
Personality┃ Shy, Skittish, Loyal, Hates fighting
22 out of 25
A pretty good base-- definitely distinguishable from Tiger-'s stereotypes. I would note that skittish and loyal are a bit contradictory. You can't be loyal to someone but also flighty.
This is a hard protagonist to write, however. Usually, you need an active character to drive the story, whereas he would be very passive.
He may need a few more distinct traits, the first two and last are mostly in the same group. For instance, maybe he's very empathetic, creative and altruistic.
