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Oh, awesome, I love original roles. This one sounds really intriguing too. I don't usually rate this part, but if I did it would be a 5/5.
Age┃ 9 moons when her story begins {I'm writing a story about her}
All right, I'll be reading it for sure. (Also, if anyone else ends up reading this Cliffsong is an amazing writer and person, I highly recommend doing the same!)
I'll try to make this as in-depth as possible to help you, so sorry if it's a bit harsher than usual!
Clan┃ TimberClan {In the book I'm writing there are two clans, TimberClan and LakeClan. They live somewhere further north than south, so it's a bit colder than usual there. TimberClan lives in a forest filled with glades, aspen trees, oak trees, sycamores, and birches ; LakeClan lives on a tiny peninsula sticking out into a lake.}
I love that you described them, and that you have an idea of their landscape! You might find this interesting: all of these trees can be found in the states, in a West Virginia forest in particular. There's an image below, maybe you can use it to help you a bit.
There, you'll find a lot of shrews, bats, snowshoe hares, mice, voles, wood thrush, birds, and flying squirrels. The predators would be coyotes, wolves, and foxes.
The temperatures would be about -7°C (or 18°F) in January when it's coldest, or 14° C (or 57.6°F) at the hottest I'm not sure if this would fit your temperature range, just an idea!
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Appearance┃ Charcoal-gray thick fur with darker paws, tail-tip, and face, a pink nose and pads, intense orange eyes. Plumy dark gray tail and very long, curved claws.
13/15 She sounds beautiful, honestly, I love this. She seems like she's smoke! However, know that darker paws/face are only possible by genetic mutation unless she's a colourpoint Siamese cat/part Siamese.
I love the pink nose and paw pads, as well as the amber eyes. I would suggest using the smoke colouration to use for her, I'll include an image below. The first one is a tortoiseshell smoke, and the second is a black smoke kitten.
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