Hiya! Here is one of the first poems I wrote. Its a bit juvenile, but I think it sets a tone for the rest of the poems. I am happy to accept critiques!
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Sanctuary
I want to write about
What amazes me. Even the most
Painful things, for in hell
I can still say the brimstone is beautiful.
And more than this,
I want my words to sting, touch
Nerves and emotions we didn't
Know we have the capacity to feel.
I want lonely souls to
Read my poems, tattoo them on their
Body, and I want my words to make them a little less lonely,
Like I understand their sadness,
Because I do. I want
My writing to change lives,
To save lives, because they have saved mine.
I want people to be fascinated
With my mind, for no one has
Ever admired it like the words that
Lend themselves to me do,
Above all of this, I want my poems
To be there for people to recite
When the dark is unbearably long
And your thoughts are insufferable.
To add a small bit of peace and solace
To latch onto until it seems safe.
Until you can create your own sanctuary.
YOU ARE READING
songs we sang on sundays
Poetrya random collection of original poems by yours truly about love, depression, god, and all things teen angst. feel free to give critiques (kindly please). I haven't shared these with many people and I want to get better at this craft I love so dearly...