Everyone's done exceptionally well and called yourself the true stans of our baby boy hot nerd KIM NAMJOON (no offense people he's a genius and looks like a God)
The FIRST place winner is:
The World of Baby Joonie | Starrynight_Hobi 🥇
Score: 78
Really cute storyline. We love them being domestic and cute. But I really suggest that the author focuses more on a better note that the words can be more influential, you know what I mean? Although, I must say that I was really interested and invested into the book as I read through. It was hard for me to click on the vote button and reveal myself! I hope you update frequently and entertain your readers and me with your cute world of baby Joonie!
The SECOND place winner is:
Amnesia | sweeetlikeecocoa 🥈
Score: 76
Judged by SEMISTIQUE
The book has a quite a unique
plot. The title is good, but it's a
little simple for my taste. The
description did made me curious
and question every single person
that Namjoon "sees" or interacts
with.
There are only a few grammatical
errors and the use of words are
great as they're very simple and
easy to understand. However,
due to some minor mistakes, like
typos, has made me confused that
I have to reread the sentence or
paragraph once or twice.
Adding much more mystery and
thrill will spice the story. There
are scenes which in my opinion
will make the chapter better
when they use the "show not tell"
method. Having more description
on the settings will create a better
atmosphere.
In addition, it feels quite rushed
that Namjoon got back most of his
memories quickly.
Mark came out of the blue and
Namjoon's reaction doesn't
feel that much understandable/
justifiable due to not having any
prior interaction with him.
The THIRD place winner is:
Moonchild | strawberry1d 🥉
Score: 68
Judged by SEMISTIQUE
The title is nice. The description
will be better if they shortened it
and added more "mystery".
I love the plot. Soulmates are fairly
common in this reading platform,
but the twist that they've added
made it really interesting. The fact
that she, the heroine, is more than
what she seems is nice.
The vocabulary is fairly simple,
although there are grammatical
and punctuation errors easily
noticeable. Rereading the chapters
and editing them will surely
improve it.
The way the author narrates the
story is interesting. It's mostly
simple, but there are times where
there are some quite complicated
subjects and things being
discussed that you don't usually
find.
It's quite common to see authors
"telling" alot and isn't as common
than "showing" much. Yet, they
both affect the story.
In this case, the author "narrates"
or "tells" too much information
which could've been "shown"
or "described". For example,
describing the pictures used as
reference for places and people
instead of just placing them in the
middle of the scenes. As a reader,
they are quick to grasp what they
read especially with the choice of
words.
There are some scenes where the
author gives too much information
at once, making it harder to
remember. The character's
personalities and their relationship
with each other are common.
Overall, the book has a interesting
plot and story and I wish the
author would take time to consider
rewriting/editing the book. It has
a unique touch that can help it
bloom to a great story.
Mr.Perfect | Pink_Mania_Jin
Score: 62
Judged by SEMISTIQUE
Not gonna lie, the plot is simple but the twist is great. The way it is written in short storyline with cliffhangers in every chapter, but I suggest you to keep some extra details which keeps the readers engaged. There are some grammatical mistakes which can be easily fixed.
A koalification in love | JeonJudisu
Score: 56
Judged by SEMISTIQUE
Good grammar and use of
punctuations. The start is pretty
confusing since the author used
a label right away in the second
paragraph. Too many characters
being introduced at once makes
it hard to remember who each is.
The names are uncommon and
confusing that made me think it
was a typo at first since it's the
first time I've seen those names.
Setting is quite unclear. The plot is
unique and intriguing. Rereading
and editing recomended.
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