✍ Round-5 (K.N.J Winners)

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Book: "The mysterious florist"

Author: Mrs_Namnam

Judge 1: lovely7122

Title:- 4/5
(It is creative as well the word is increasing the curiosity of readers)
Cover:- 7/10
(It is colourful also matches with the title)
Description:- 8/10
(Well organised)
First impression:- 7/10
Writing style:- 9/10
Character's actions and decisions:- 8/10
Plot:- 17/20
Sense:- 7/10
Spelling, grammar an vocabulary:- 9/10
Explanation:- 4/5

Total:- 80/100

Advice/ review: (Didn't give any)

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Judge 2: im_namjesus-1st

Title:- 5/5
Cover:- 9/10
Description:- 8/10
First impression:- 8/10
Writing style:- 10/10
Character's actions and decisions:- 7/10
Plot:- 18/20
Explanation:- 4/5
Sense:- 9/10
Spelling, grammar and vocabulary:- 10/10

Total:- 88/100

Title: Goes perfectly with the story.

Cover: The word mysterious is not seen very clearly.

Descriptions: The description is a little vague, and it's hard to find out what the author is talking about.

First impression: The first chapter doesn't have the female main character. It makes the reader think that the other girl is the main character.

Writing style: The writing style is truly amazing, especially the little poems in the end.

Character's actions and decisions: The characters were a little too hasty in making decisions. They met for the first time and told each other that they love them then and there.

Plot: The florist part is unique, but the main point of this story is very common.

Explanation: Well explained, but a few parts the readers will have to make sense by themselves.

Sense: The story makes sense mostly but in a part like when they're romance is going on, at that time the brothers practically disappeared.

Advice/ review: This is a really good book, but the climax is a little rushed. Apart from that, the book is amazing!

Your scores are...

1st judge:- 80

2nd judge:- 88

Average:- 84 from 100

Bonus:- (+5)

And...

Final score:- (84+5) =89

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