Ayo there my lovely peeps! I've updated all the chapters to make it easier to distinguish the time in which these events take place. I also want to explain a few things about the layout and why I chose to write the story this way. I will begin by discussing some *cough cough* confusions.
• Chapters are too short
This story was written in one day. Just one. That's an achievement. And the chapters are meant to be short. What I have written, I have written. There is nothing more to add (though I may tweak and edit sentences here and there because I'm a perfectionist), so please don't beg for longer chapters.
• Confused by what I'm reading
You're supposed to be confused, honey! That's part of the whole purpose of the book! It is a tiny fragment in a much bigger picture I have yet to reveal. So yeah, it's not gonna make much sense (or dollars) and it's not supposed to.
• Confused as to when the events take place
All fixed up, sweetie pie. I changed the tenses in the chapters that tell of past events and italicized them. I also changed all the "present" chapters to present tense.
Hope that helps.
Thanks for reading and let me know if I'm too salty for you ;)
~ Ceci
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Hollow Eyes
Mystery / ThrillerThey come from an alternate dimension. They are empty. They are soulless. They have no stomachs, but they are carnivorous. They are called Cavae Oculos. And they reside in abandoned laundromats. Theo Letterman denies Their existence. He does not be...
