So, Lyds is quite tired, so she'll be PM-ing your stickers shortly! It'd be very helpful if you could message her, Jells_, with the genre and place that you won. Thank you! Also, please make sure to thank the judges. Even though some didn't submit, the one's who did really saved her a lot of time. Finally, Merry Christmas to you all!! - Mareah
Judges:
In first place is Sapphire Flame by yazzwrites with a score of 51.5/60!
Review: the storyline for this is interesting, and a lot different from most werewolf books i've read. i like that she knew her mate beforehand, although, she never knew that he was her mate, it makes for a more realistic relationship later on as they already have a connection. your descriptions are amazing! i adore baby kaena, and you were able to portray her and mutt's bond in such an adorable way. you're quite good at showing instead of telling. i do wish we got more emotions from kaena when she first realized that mutt wasn't just a wolf, although that might just be me not getting far enough into the story. the grammar is next to perfect, and i didn't have to stop during reading to catch mistakes. you did an excellent job, and i hope to see more of your writing later on! – mareah/lyds
In second place is Going Through the Woods Together by kiyoko_no_kimi with a score of 50/60!
Review: I adore the spin you did on little red riding hood with her being the wolf! You did such an excellent job of portraying her relationship with her grandma and the reason why she continues going on to her grandma's house. It's an interesting driving motive (and kinda reminded me of Mulan while reading for some reason) and you do an excellent job of weaving in culture and bringing honor to her family. Also, just the way you described the chasing scene made me fall in love with the story. It was the perfect blend of description and action that let me follow her thought process and feel the fear. So, good job on the story and I can't wait to read more! ~ Asteria
In third place is The Fragility of Fate by thesanguinesongbird with a score of 48/60!
Review: Well, it was certainly an interesting start and you did a good job of expressing Gabriel's rage and want for revenge. It's a pretty fast-paced story, with your first describing the relationship between Gabriel and his father/brother before suddenly jumping to Eliza and him. Although I have nothing against explicit scenes, I am a firm believer in them needing to add something to the plot, which is one of the reasons why I did feel iffy about the one with Eliza as I just wasn't sure why it was needed. It was kinda thrown in in my opinion. You're good at describing emotions and thoughts, utilizing sentence variety to bring those points across strongly. Overall, you did well, and it was a nice, hooking start! ~ Asteria
Congrats to all the winners! And again, Merry Christmas! I hope you all have a lovely rest of the year. :)
STAI LEGGENDO
The 2020 Talent Awards | ✔️
Casualestatus: closed still very self-explanatory. other than that, i have nothing to say.
