loving this story, although if you could please fix the "then"s that should be "than"s that would be perfect. I look forward to more chapter! ^.^
Sorry. Writing on my tablet, n im not very good. enuff, already. i luv ur book n am really looking forward to hav mor. Cheryl
This is a brilliant opening, I really like how it unfolds and the writing is excellent.
Wow At the beginning i wanted to correct my english and I have it. This book is very nice. Always you wanna read it and I like it :)
I'm sensing the next Harry Potter coming up through this book, the first chapter was awesome!
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