Great!! ;D Keep up!! And I think that critiques from @wearetheminority will be a great help to improve your story.
LOL!!! " 'thank you,' i muttered.'I think I'll call you...Fluffy!' " THT WAS HILARIOUS CUZ OF THE CHANGE IN MOODS :D lol
i didn't think ur summary was bad. the part at the end where she wanted to call him fluffy made me laugh
Great story I like it so far but just a tip it's like another story on here 'fighting to go on' just a heads up in case anything gets said about it..
I really like your story doll. Your punctuation and spelling is good! Keep going :)
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