Really like your writing style. I can really feel the characters sadness. Good job.
Wow this is really good. I can't feel the character's pain. This is excellent really! Voted!
This sounds so sad!. But it's got a great catch to it. Especially the three sentence description :)
I want to cry ! but at the same time I want to know more ! chapter one here I come =]
This is so emotional and deep! Its got great descriptions and depth! Keep writing! :)
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