Changing You
Jessie's popular. Jessie's hot. Jessie never had any problems in her life. Since she moved to NYC. Before it was different before she wasn't the popular girl. Before she never was tangled up in a mess of emotion. But then Jessie meets HIM. Not the real him. An angel from the future telling her an impossible thing to do to keep HIM from dying. But she doesn't believe the angel, she doesn't want to do what's needed to save two lives. Her life and his life. She doesn't want to go back to that times again. But is her popularity in school really worth dying? Or will she sacrifice it to stay alive?
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This is kind of cliche, but it's still good. There were a little bit of mistakes regarding punctuation, but it's still good. I'll be sure to read on. (:
good amount od detail and description! awsome!!! really hooked. and wow, its hard to believ english isn't your mother tongue. you wrote this amazingly !! :)
Wowww what an interesting twist! I've honestly not read anything like it. There is many places you could take this.
This story has so much potential, the beginning of this is really good. I think it could go really far, and I do think your a very talented writer.
I would have phrased it, "Want to get there before dark (or midnight)" because Twilight reminds me of the movies, lol. But nothing wrong with it!
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| Name | Dani |
| Location | Vienna, Austria |
| Birthday | Dec 09 |
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