UPDATE: I'm back.

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Okay, first of all, wow! 34.7k reads. That's a lotta reads, guys, thank you ❤️

Second of all, wow! This story is unbelievably terrible, the grammar, the plot, the misuse of several words, not to mention my sentence structure. Makes meh cringe guys, it really does. 


I've sat here, at 01:59 and read every. Single. Comment. Most of which  were related t my overuse of commas, which doesn't surprise me at all given how much I used them. 

I will give myself a bit of credit considering a wrote this when I was around 12/13, and still ended up getting as many reads and fans as I have. 

I appreciate that many of you have enjoyed this story, as i also appreciate any of you haven't. It seems to be that the main problem people find with this story is the grammar, punctuation, and spelling in general, which I totally understand. 


Just wanna flex a little and show off that I got A* in both English and English literature that year which I am still pretty happy about. Besides the point, irrelevant 😓😂


I'm thinking of either rewriting this story entirely (in the third person) or deleting 

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 08, 2019 ⏰

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