what do you think ?(Feedback Needed)

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so i've been stuck since the last chapter because i feel liks you guys would rather i rewrite it and change a few things. the little feedback that i was given isnt so great, and i cant understand why. if you can just leave a comment and help me understand where i went wrong i would

really appreciate it.

xo

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