Hide and seek (Book 1)

Chapter 1

Its late at night and the library is closed with her in it, he is somewhere here to, she's scared of him but while hiding from him, she can't stop being aroused by the demonic mating ritual of hide and seek, hunter and prey and she was his.

First story so I'd like to know how it is, I'm really not good with judgment but if its the truth and your opinion with what you think would be/make it better then I thank you

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I'm on my way to school, running like a maniac and you would not believe my luck, it starts raining and I'm still a good 5 minutes from school! Anyway I forgot to introduce myself, I swear I'm so forgetful that I can plan my own suprise party! laugh out loud... I'm Jade, I'm seventeen and this is my last year of school which starts today so even almost soaked I have to get to school on time to get a perfect record so that I can get a scholarship for college. I was in class just after the second bell but of cause no one noticed and the teacher was not there yet so I took my seat at the back of the classroom on the opposite side of the populars. After roll call I took the opportunity to nap for 10 minutes since I only had a few hours of sleep because of my Mixed Martial Arts session every sunday at half ten to half twelve.

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Its finely lunch and I take my queue to...the library. Our first project is English of cause :/ and we have to do it in a group, which will be announced at the end of last period on the white board, in the mean while we should think up topics that are critically judged and the truth/opinion. I already got my topic, I just have to do more research, as a loner thats mostly reading I come apon strange books and one that interested me is 'Witchcraft', I just wish I have a good group. "hi Miss Scrubs, I'd like to take this book home but I don't have a card, because you know I always read here but I'm doing a project and n-" "I'm sorry my child but although its just one book, without a card you cannot borrow, bring in your things in tomorrow and fill in this form and you can borrow up to seven books for a week" she smiles and walks away, sigh maybe I'll go to our local library and see if they got more than one book but I should wait to see if we can do this topic in the first place because there would be no use borrowing it for nothing since I went through some of it already.