This is the first real story I had ever written. In all honesty, I got lazy at some parts and at others, I just didn't know how to get the point across that I wanted to make, so I didn't bother.
I've had lots of people complain about the relationship aspect of this story, and I'm sorry that it doesn't seem "real" or whatever. To be perfectly honest, I have no real life relationship experience to base the story off of. Everything I chose to include in this story was necessary for the main plot, so when it came to subplots, I got very lazy. So just a warning, some people get really annoyed throughout my story at certain points (which I won't specify because I don't want to spoil the book).
If I were to rewrite the story, I would go back and fix these little things, but as of now, I'm just going to leave my work as it is.
Thank you for choosing to read my book, and without further ado, enjoy!!
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Thunder
Science FictionKyleigh Everson's life is changed completely when she wakes up in the hospital and discovers that she was struck by lightning and her only scar is an unusual white streak in her hair. Strange things begin happening and Kyleigh soon discovers she has...
