#27 - Unrealistic Bullshit
If I'm reading a story, I want to actually feel like I am there in the book as this main character. This does not apply for fantasy stories with the title of fantasy, known as fucking fantasy. But that realistic shit. I want to feel it. Dont give me some bullshit, nah fam. I want to feel itttt🙌
#28 - Too Fast
When the book moves to fucking fast WITH A FUKING TIME SKIP EVERY FUCKING CHAPTER i die a little inside. Fr you guys... Don't try and cram too much in. It makes readers uncomfortable...
#29 - TOO PERFECT
OKAY DO YOU EVER STOP AND THINK WHAT YOURE DOING. The girl is perfect, right? No disorders. Not too skinny. Not too fat. She's fine. But yet, she has all these people bullying her for being fat or stupid. That's so fucking unrealistic I can't.
