So right now, I'm joining a book club. In this club, I get to be partnered with a lot of people to read with each other, and also to fix the mistakes that we've made. I'm glad I can find the book club, because so many people are pointing out the things I could fix, such as excessive use of adverbs, incorrect punctuation, repeated names and the word 'said, exclaimed, etc', and some chapters that are too lengthy.
I've made quite a big revision based on the inputs I've received (I'm not going to say that it's perfect already). However, as I'm still in the book club and will not be on Hiatus or Break mode for maybe two or three months (or maybe even more than that), I cannot totally revise it. Therefore I'm going to upload the revision only for the parts that my reading partner have passed through.
Hopefully it will not disturb the entire book club reading process :D
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Dylan King and His New Roommate Called Goddess Athena [1st Book]
FantasyLike anyone else, a 25-year-old mini market worker Dylan King will never think that he will witness the Greek Goddess Athena come out from a yellow lightning spark magically appears in his room. It turns out that the goddess has just managed to free...
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