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Fear- (tim wright) masky x reader

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Tim wright/masky x reader Loosely based off of marble hornets Her life was hardly her own. "Sometimes, I get so lost in my fantasies that I forget what is real..." 20 parts so far. Ongoing

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I just read the first chapter as if I didn't write it. 
It sucks ass guys. 
The sentences don't make sense there's WAY too many "because and's and buts"
The sentences are way too long. 
Should I go back and fix them?
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