“New ideas seem like frightening ghosts to people at the beginning; they run away from them for a long time, but they get tired of it in the end!”
― Mehmet Murat ildan, Galileo Galilei
Okay lovelies, this is the only story I'm getting response at. Good one.
The people who have made my dream come true, I mean the people who have really loved my story and have helped increase my reads are:
@Soffaa
@BabyMeringue
@Shewearshighheels
Some comments that encouraged me:
I love this story already!!! :) You're a great writter! dani_jay
I love chelsey's character and Chris's character! He is seriously a pain in ass!! chocolatesrock
great dialogue in this opening. liked the backstory. very real feel to the writing too. good stuff! voted possumbooks
wow! your main character also is running away from her home :3 I'm a sucker for teen romances :D I really like this :') SapphireRosee
Like the cover its cute :L like the description that you use and your writing is so emotive. Says a lot about the story aswell and adds on to the atmosphere. well done :) emilytwin
I think this has quite alot of potential to be a fantastic book! I've never heard of a storyline like this before so it's very original! So far, I like both the characters! (Chelsey does sound a bit like me cause I never shut up) I think you've done a great job! Keep up the good work :D Can't wait to read more :D Soffaa
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And for the people who think the title is extremely long: Well peeps, you must have heard of Paulo Coelho- Author of The Alchemist. He has written one master piece "By the River Piedra I sat down and wept". Long, eh? But it's popular like hell. So fellas, these things don't matter. Just keep on with anything you're writing. :)
I hope you guys like this story. :) And I hope that it gets enough reads and votes so I could add this into the category of Watty Awards.
Much love,
Fabbi. xx
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