Runaway Bride

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Chapter 12: Just when I thought it was over

“STOP!” I screamed suddenly.

We came to an abrupt halt while everyone turned to look at me with exasperated looks. I pointed my finger out the window to the spot where I thought I saw something written. I jumped out of the car and walked over, and I was right, (of course). I started to read what it wrote, and after reading it in my head I read it aloud trying to keep the anger contained. But it seemed to leak out into my voice as I spoke.

“You can’t have Zack, and Zack can’t have you! Simple as that Elena. I’ve already messed up enough times to know whether I die or not that anyone would care! So I thought, maybe I could have YOU Elena. You know we belong together!  You don’t belong with Zack! But if you really care, and if you even notice this which I doubt (that is why I’m being so ‘out and open’ about liking you part). But anyways, if you want to even witness Zack’s death, then be here at 4:00. Which I know you won’t be able to! And you’ll be all mine. Good-bye my love.” My voice seemed to take control of it self as the words were basically hissed out of my mouth.

I ran as fast as I could just to get there sooner. I was going to the place where Zack and I first met. How was he going to kill him? Seriously. He’s a vampire for gosh sake! I tried to see if I could send messages to Zack telepathically but it didn’t seem to be working out. But finally, I got a message back from Zack.

‘Elena! Oh thank god your okay, I’ve missed you so much! I know you’ve already figured out that my brothers taken me, but meet me at the run down amusement park that’s where it’s going to take place. Where he’s going to…. Kill me. And if you don’t make it in time, I still love you Elena. You remember that, I’ll love you forever and always.’

Then he was gone. His voice seemed to be getting weaker and weaker by the end. A tear escaped my eye and I started to sob while trying to take deep breaths to help myself. This made me go in over drive to reach Zack. I didn’t even know I could run this fast. Suddenly I felt something sharp pierce my leg. I stumbled and rolled. I looked down to see and arrow and a guy on a roof looking for pleased with himself and the bow in his hands. I took the arrow out of my leg and looked up at the guy with a smile wiped off his face. I aimed, and through the arrow right at his leg. He fell on his knees in pain from the throw of the arrow. I smiled with determination and was off running again. I could see the amusement park it was right out of reach. My legs starting to hurt really bad…Ah crap he poisoned it! Whatever as long as I get to Zack.

‘Zack, sweetie where are you?’ I said telepathically.

‘Near the broken down Ferris…wh…whe….’ Then he was gone.

I had to go to the Ferris wheel and save Zack. Suddenly I felt another sting at my back. I pulled another poisonous arrow out of my back. My run turned to a walk considering the pain I was in but then I started to jog realizing Zack was probably in more pain than me. I saw the Ferris wheel and saw Zack tied up to it. I didn’t see anyone so I ran to him and as soon as I got there I kissed him. I missed him so much and finally I got to see him.

“Bravo, Bravo. You’ve finally gotten to Zack! But oh no, Elena! It looks like you’re dying as well. It doesn’t look like you can stop that Ferris wheel from crashing down on you and Zack, can you?” He said deviously.

And ‘he’ would be the one and only, Chris. And he was right, I could barley move my body. Only enough to shield Zack if anything happened. Suddenly we heard the creaking of the Ferris wheel being rocked back and forth by Chris.