Hey there! This is Player Unknown here. This is my first time writing a story this long.
I would really appreciate some feedback from you. What can I do to make this story more enjoyable or appealing to you? Is there anyway I can improve?
Your opinions mean everything to me so please share your thoughts in the comments.
Thanks for reading!
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Orphaned Mystery: Case Unsolved
Mystery / ThrillerFirst Book! Kind of Hasty but hope you enjoy!