tranquillity__

Hey! I just published the first chapter of my new book Mercy. I'd really appreciate if you could read it and tell me what you think <3

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

tranquillity__

No problem, the prologue was incredible xx 
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paintoutsidelines

Hey. Hope you're good and well. I miss your story Mercy

paintoutsidelines

@paintoutsidelines Happy New year too. Take your time. But your story is honestly amazing:)
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tranquillity__

Hi! I’ve been so unproductive recently but I’ll try and publish a new chapter ASAP!! Happy new year xx 
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paintoutsidelines

Thank you soooo much for the love

tranquillity__

@paintoutsidelines some people really think racism is rare or claim they "don't see colour." Systematic racism very much exists and casual racism has become so normalised in first world countries, if you call people out you're classed as a "snowflake" or "overreacting."  I'm truly sorry you have to live with this, I really think it's time for the world to change.
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paintoutsidelines

@tranquillity__  I honestly can't wait to read more. Your book is a delight. And I absolutely get what you mean. Racism is everywhere and black people or any person of colour have alot of relatable struggles no matter where they are in the world. And I'm personally from Africa but racism is so visible. We are living the outcomes of this engineered system that wasn't built for us. And as much as people may think 'you' are in Africa where the majority is black, we are feeling the brunt of it. The non people of colour owns everything and we are the working class but also my people are fighting against different kinds of racism. 
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tranquillity__

@paintoutsidelines thank you so much!! All the previous books that I've attempted writing turned out so horribly so I'm really glad you like this one xx
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SarahGreenStories

Thank you so much for your votes!! It would mean a lot to me to get some feedback from you :) hope you're enjoying the story so far.

SarahGreenStories

@tranquillity__ Thank you so much for your kind words  That's what I was going for, I wanted it to be a bit mysterious, but keep it light and refreshing. Hope you keep enjoying your reading!
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tranquillity__

@SarahGreenStories I really enjoyed the first few chapters! The plot is so intriguing and refreshing, I can't wait to read more :)
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