JordanPeart

@palominolane just a few typos nothing major and you should reread it it will make you smile x x

JordanPeart

@palominolane you are very welcomr! As a Rnglish grad I''m used to picking a story to pieces, I can't find fault in your writibg and it always makes ne snile and feel better :-) I keenly await yoyr next update! I am lucky enough to have found my Noah aswell :-) x x  

palominolane

lol, I'm shocking at English lol... but I'm sure I will have a ton to fix up when I look back through it. I never reread my stories I just write them quickly and press update, I'm going to be horrified when I finally reread the story lol. Maybe I will start reading Avalon tonight just so I crack up
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