pheonix-on-fire

I would really appreciate it if you could check out my stuff. I need constructive criticism on my work. My novel is a time travel romance and I have posted three chapters on my page. I have tried my best to be historically accurate but I need someone to point out the shortcomings. I am serious about writing and have high hopes for this book. It is half done and I haven’t come up with a title yet. Maybe you could recommend something lol.

HappyBerry

Hey there I was hoping you could check out my story... Sorry if it sounds sort of random, you probably get these a lot. ^^;; 
          
          It's called Motive. A story about 5 adolescents on the verge of adulthood but pushed into maturity through a series of events. They all circle around one beautiful corrupted boy who seems to have a twisted sick past that connects them all. A tangled net of Fears, desires, love, betrayal, blood, and motives.

mebby88

Hey, sorry these messages are annoying. But, i was wondering if you had any free time, can you check out my story Pure Bliss 
          Please tell me what you think,That would be awesome! But if you don't, that's fine. Thank you!! :) 
          ~Mebby88 
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          Bliss Collins didn't know how stressful & difficult her senior year of high school would be. But school isn't Bliss's problem. 
          Dylan Heart's life changed when he moved to the small town of Meadow Valley. His life is full of secrets with one secret that is hard to keep. Let's just say, he isn't a typical teenager. 
          Let's not forget about Lucas Heart. Dylan's older brother. He also shares Dylan's secret. 
          In a town full of psycho stalkers, vampires, werewolves, hunters, & a killer on the loose, Meadow Valley is nothing but peaceful.

TaintedBloodBooks

Like vampire stories? Well, sink your teeth into this!
          
          'The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan'
          
          ^ My story follows a teenage runaway, who sells her body to make a living. And her not so average life is about to get even more bizarre when she meets a guy who gives her a little more then she bargained for. ;-)
          
          -- Emma.