You would expect nothing but the ordinary from a teenage girl with a loving family, but Shaylene discovers that when she makes a critical mistake, it doesn't seemed to be forgotten.
hmm interesting, will you be writing more to this? i hope i so im liking it :)
I like this :) it's different from Burden to bare, but it's just as exciting and mind-boggling! :D
Whoa! What happened to her??
I really like this so far, it was a really good start. You most definately should continue writing :)
Ack! Don't leave me hanging...what happens next?
You've opened up the story very well - drawing me in wanting more :)