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The Watchers Of Protection(rwby Goddesses X Male ARCHANGEL)

The Watchers Of Protection(rwby Goddesses X Male ARCHANGEL)

21.7K Reads 279 Votes 5 Part Story
Atlasnuke5 By Atlasnuke5 Updated Jun 26, 2016

You are 18 yrs old and watches over people.
They look up to you for safety,hope and protection. You always helped the weak. That's when you were watched. Little did you know goddesses were watching you.

I better not get put into a poke ball or there will be problems
... my initial reaction at the summary was...
                              OH MY GOD I'M A PEDOPHILE
churchliveson churchliveson Nov 12, 2016
It would be a lot better if quotes were separated from the rest of the story line
deadgamer427 deadgamer427 Sep 21, 2016
The "mystery" people talking are obviously Ruby Weiss Blake and Yang. In that order
Archshangz Archshangz Dec 31, 2016
Damn I also have a not noticeable but a cool scar going over my right eye
Garantha Garantha Jul 30, 2016
This seems interesting but you should seperate the dialogue from the rest of the text instead of sticking it into a paragraph. That would make this easier to read.