You are 18 yrs old and watches over people.
They look up to you for safety,hope and protection. You always helped the weak. That's when you were watched. Little did you know goddesses were watching you.
... my initial reaction at the summary was...
OH MY GOD I'M A PEDOPHILE
It would be a lot better if quotes were separated from the rest of the story line
The "mystery" people talking are obviously Ruby Weiss Blake and Yang. In that order
Damn I also have a not noticeable but a cool scar going over my right eye
This seems interesting but you should seperate the dialogue from the rest of the text instead of sticking it into a paragraph. That would make this easier to read.