Falling Behind

Falling Behind

322 Reads 24 Votes 3 Part Story
WISHforME By WISHforME Updated Sep 28, 2011

ASD or Atrial Septal Defect, Monica was diagnosed with this when she was Twelve, but she pushed on and climbed the mountains that held her down and today she works at a very succesfull law firm, this is her story of how she overcame what she went through to get to where she is today, there's a little love and humor in there somewhere, this is what life is to her.

  • asd
  • love-hate
  • monica
  • relationship
  • sickness
SanayaKant SanayaKant Sep 29, 2011
the starting is very beautifully describe. i like how you have drawn in the readers attention. the story touched me when i read that monica has ASD. this is a lovely and different concept. reading on....
detectiveblu detectiveblu Sep 28, 2011
Woah, awesome beginning.
                              
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                              its a dark teen-fiction. its about 5 friends whose lives were changed forever by the suicide of a girl they don't even know.
izzybelleraine izzybelleraine Sep 27, 2011
Let me just tell ya. This beginning REALLY drew me in. For real. I am soo going to continue to read.
                              -Izzy
dustclears dustclears Sep 27, 2011
Poor Monica. So much emotion in this book, I'm loving it! Keep up the good work :)
EmmaWilliams66 EmmaWilliams66 Sep 27, 2011
I think this is a really good start. It is clear that you have a talent for this butthe whole idea is very good too great job so far
AmyWritesXO AmyWritesXO Sep 27, 2011
Really cool story idea! 
                              I like the start a lot it has a lot of emotion and feeling :] 
                              Well done on a good story start x