The Littlest one (Editing)

The Littlest one (Editing)

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brooke903675 By brooke903675 Updated Nov 05, 2017

Scarlett Adams is a 13 year old girl who has five older brothers. They are really overprotective of here. But they don't understand a girls life.

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Nonya232 Nonya232 Jul 29, 2017
My phone has a finger print lock so my brother can't use my phone
JessieRedmond JessieRedmond Apr 03, 2018
Can u please add "quotations" when u do dialoge its really confusing other wise
Backflipz101 Backflipz101 Mar 15, 2018
my bother is SUPER protective of me he is 6 years older than me
dyslexickid dyslexickid Oct 10, 2017
Can you use speech marks instead of saying said with no speech marks (like you’ll say said ____ but with speech marks)
NerdyNinjaLife NerdyNinjaLife Apr 02, 2016
Whenever someone is talking, you put " at the beginning and end. Try spacing things in paragraphs for a different topic, and I don't want to seem mean. That isn't my goal. It's just this story has to much potential, I just wanted to help you out a little bit
WorriedZizi WorriedZizi Dec 17, 2018
can you please do " when someone is speaking? it gets confusing.