The Littlest one (Editing)

The Littlest one (Editing)

29.1K Reads 528 Votes 9 Part Story
brooke903675 By brooke903675 Updated Nov 05

Scarlett Adams is a 13 year old girl who has five older brothers. They are really overprotective of here. But they don't understand a girls life.

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Nonya232 Nonya232 Jul 29
My phone has a finger print lock so my brother can't use my phone
liv1234xx liv1234xx Oct 10
Can you use speech marks instead of saying said with no speech marks (like you’ll say said ____ but with speech marks)
NerdyNinjaLife NerdyNinjaLife Apr 02, 2016
Whenever someone is talking, you put " at the beginning and end. Try spacing things in paragraphs for a different topic, and I don't want to seem mean. That isn't my goal. It's just this story has to much potential, I just wanted to help you out a little bit