Separated

Separated

2.9K Reads 86 Votes 9 Part Story
Eva By BookishMusic Updated Apr 11, 2012

Scarlett Raybould, a seventeen year old girl (who is soon to be 18) is living on the Women's Part of the world, called Bluemera. When she turns 18 she will have to visit the Men's Part of the world called Rhodennus to find her 'soulmate'. Scarlett is very reluctant to do so, but she really has no choice..

  • bluemera
  • fiction
  • fun
  • future
  • rhodennus
  • scarlett
  • separated
  • seperated
chlodochar5wolf chlodochar5wolf Sep 11, 2011
This chapter explains things, so it's a filler, really. But I'm glad you didn't put all this information into an author's note and actually attempted to incorporate it into the story. You still haven't answered WHY, though.
chlodochar5wolf chlodochar5wolf Sep 11, 2011
Ohhh that IS a unique idea! I'm curious about how it got that way. And what on EARTH is marriage like? And what the point of writing the letters is. And- and- Yeah...
RickyCollazo RickyCollazo Sep 10, 2011
I liked for being ur first story I haven't done any I hope I can be as good as u
LateNightOwl LateNightOwl Sep 05, 2011
It's very interesting. A few grammar mistakes, but easily fixable. (:
ViolettaBlack ViolettaBlack Sep 05, 2011
I love it(: And i already said so, Keep uploading...Im going to be reading :D xx