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4276

336 Reads 14 Votes 2 Part Story
taintlesstowa16 By taintlesstowa16 Updated Sep 27, 2011

Liahona was living the kind of life she wanted to. She had a family and friends that loved her. They barley got by, but she wouldn't have it any other way. She was living the dream life.....that was until the Rebellion stormed in without warning killing off the rich and the poor. They slaughtered her family without a second thought. She got away, and now, 11 years later, she works as a slave for the people who killed her family. At age 17, her and her friend Sidney start off on a exciting journey that is life threatening with new friends and big enemies to get revenge for what they had done.

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  • prolouge
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taintlesstowa16 taintlesstowa16 Oct 12, 2011
@detectiveblu @MusicaGenia Thank you both so much! :) @MusicaGenia That@MusicaGenia s how i think it was too!! I see it playing in my head when i write it!! its awesome! :)
                              @detectiveblu if they'res any suggestions in other chapters please don't hesitate to tell me! :)
detectiveblu detectiveblu Oct 12, 2011
Wow, what a great start, is this hawaiian or something?
                              I like it a lot! I can hear the dramatic music in my head. But maybe try to be a wee bit more descriptive. Other then that it's fabulous! :)
Hellnobish Hellnobish Oct 12, 2011
I can legitly see this being a movie! like right away my head started spinning and i wasnt reading i was dreaming(in the good way/ with the story) I am reading on :D
taintlesstowa16 taintlesstowa16 Sep 06, 2011
@WhiteBubbi Oh my goodness... haha thank you soo much!!! i didn't even notice that!! :P thank you soo much!!! :) and don't worry i'm going to be continuing
xPureChances xPureChances Sep 06, 2011
Continue this story. Its amazing and not like any other stories I read before *voted*
bubblegdrop95 bubblegdrop95 Sep 04, 2011
Oh I really like this Megs! Way to start off. Loving the detail. feels like some scenes were skipped but I think I do the same ;p good job sister! I'll keep reading so you better keep it up! :)