Connect the Dots

Connect the Dots

1 Part Story 223 Reads 6 Votes
Chelsea By Crayzee Completed

Poem about the hardships everyone faces. An internal conflict.

Crayzee Crayzee Nov 06, 2011 04:43PM
@Metranime haha, lovely comment :D  Thank you for the vote and criticism! <3
Crayzee Crayzee Oct 30, 2011 01:55AM
@JustAnotherPoet Thank you so much!  I am very proud of this poem because of its strong emotions, and I'm glad it didn't annoy you  Thank you again.  Your comment made me smile :D
i really like it! usually i find rhyming poems annoying, but honestly you pulled it off so well and the fact that you didn't end it with a rhyme made it extremely strong! great poem!