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Past Forgivings

Past Forgivings

326 Reads 9 Votes 2 Part Story
J. By J020163 Updated Sep 18, 2010

‘Teenage mother Louise Rosemary was in a car accident at the age of 18 when her two friends Emily Clinton, 19, and Dianna McCarran, 18, went out to drink then decided to drive up the cliff sides while drinking. Emily Clinton and Dianna McCarran sadly perished that night on the cliffs while Louise Rosemary suffered internal bleeding and sever concussion.’

That was what the news article released exactly 24hrs after Lousie Rosemary and her friends had a car accident.
After Louise is released from intensive care, she is taken in from a kind strange to try and sort out her new life; but another obviously doesn't like that idea.
'Accident' after 'accident' follows Louise.
Is it an actual accident? or is set up? Does another want Lousie dead?
if so why?

Dragonz_Rule Dragonz_Rule Nov 14, 2010
hey u changed the view points n such... it use to b 1st person didnt it??
                              anywayz i really like it like way uve got it now :)
J020163 J020163 Oct 18, 2010
                              *laughs* yer i know... its a bad habit im trying very hard to break.
                              :) thnx for the advice tho... as i told Dragonz_Rule-- any advice is welcome and appreciated.
                              i'll let u know when ive uploaded kk.
J020163 J020163 Oct 18, 2010
                              thats great :)
                              im so hung up right now on A Girl and Her Sisters- it just wont leave my head! -but im gunna b uploading a new section in like the nxt month!
                              ^_^ thnx any advice would b great and well appreciated.
Mystery-Girl Mystery-Girl Oct 15, 2010
I think that this story is the one I had a sneak preview of -laughs-
                              Still love it though :P
                              Mystery_Girl :)
Dragonz_Rule Dragonz_Rule Oct 14, 2010
yer u cn feel the emotion frm the characters, thats always a plus in my book.
                              i'll read the nxt chpt then i'll give my advice on how to turn it into a mystery kk...
J020163 J020163 Sep 19, 2010
ok guys, i'm gunna try turn this story into a mystery....
                              so if u want to leave comments about how to do that... suggestions, advice, ideas... all those would be appreciated ^_^
                              thnx. cyaa.