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Sophie By thisissophie13 Updated Oct 24, 2010

One moment, Lauren Parken is banished from heaven for a year... Then the next, she finds herself lying down on the place that she died on. As she looks at herself in the mirror, she still sees the same girl that she was before she died; but something is different about her life now. She is now capable to love. Lauren soon starts to fall deeply in love with Lucas, a boy that she bumped into on the street. They grow deeper and deeper in love, but Lauren's time on earth is about to expire.  As the year begins to fade, so does Lauren. She starts to become more like an angel and less like a human every day. She has learnt the lesson that God sent her down to learn. But Lauren doesn't want to go back to heaven. She wants to stay on earth with Lucas and be happy forever after. What will happen to her? What will happen to Lucas? What will happen to their undying love for each other?

Amber_uk Amber_uk Oct 07, 2010
if you like this check out this story! its got everything!
thisissophie13 thisissophie13 Oct 06, 2010
@Fallen_Angel_Star_X haha, thanks! (: and its not finished yet anyways, so youve got all the time in the world to read it! and im loving your story to! im sorry ive been slightly too busy to comment on yours! but i will deffy do so, soon! pinkk promisee. ♥ yess i will!
MoniqueTheRippah MoniqueTheRippah Oct 06, 2010
@thisissophie13 Whoa what a turn in characters! You describe her attitude so well. Your a really good writer :) I cant even read the next chapter right now. I want to know what happens next!!! But I'll read asap.
                              Keep going!!
thisissophie13 thisissophie13 Oct 03, 2010
@Fallen_Angel_Star_X hahaa, thanks for reading it and voting! i promise ill finish up this chapter soon! :D
MoniqueTheRippah MoniqueTheRippah Oct 02, 2010
Aw someones got a little crush!! both of them on each other! thats cute that thier both awkward and dont know what to say :)
thisissophie13 thisissophie13 Oct 01, 2010
@Fallen_Angel_Star_X aww thanks(: im working on chapter two right now.