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Pen Your Pride
Union

Union

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Meg By megswriting Updated Jun 14

"Great heroes need great sorrows and burdens, or half their greatness goes unnoticed. It is all part of the fairy tale." -Peter S. Beagle

Cover credit to @Silver_Chick

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Yes, this actually explains a part of the character. She second guesses herself and if she makes the right choice. Sometimes a fresh fear is good for you.
Always great to have a character with snark and a bit negativity towards main character.
Great way to introduce her. I like it.
                              -And just so you know this isn't sarcastic. I truly mean what I say.
Showing the safer way yet reckless danger is a good way to start off a character in self reflection.
FulcrumSage FulcrumSage May 10
The beginning is a bit confusing with the “silence” describing the “fog” becoming the fog. You could try something like, “The thick and heavy fog crept silently through the forest; eerily opaque, its ominous form blanketed everything in its grasp.” Hope this helps. : )
gmoney2123 gmoney2123 Apr 20, 2017
Would drop the repeated on the way to headquarters and merge this sentence with the previous one