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45.6K Reads 2.4K Votes 31 Part Story
Meg By megswriting Updated Mar 31

"Great heroes need great sorrows and burdens, or half their greatness goes unnoticed. It is all part of the fairy tale." -Peter S. Beagle

Cover credit to @Silver_Chick

gmoney2123 gmoney2123 Apr 20
Would drop the repeated on the way to headquarters and merge this sentence with the previous one
2writer 2writer Feb 14, 2016
This is really great! I'm so interested to see where it goes.
ziamalike ziamalike Sep 19, 2015
bristol is such an adorable name! and your writing is so amazing. i'm jealous XD and its on halloween :D can't wait to read more.
Harryerawizard Harryerawizard Sep 17, 2015
Love your vocabulary, nice flow, tons of really nice imagery. I can see this whole thing playing out in front of me.  I am a sucker for really intriguing names and I adore the name Bristol.
BirdLysdahl BirdLysdahl Sep 15, 2015
Awesome! I really liked the story. This deserves more reads. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I like the universe/setting so far and the characters seem interesting. Keep up the amazing work!
demigod_editor demigod_editor Sep 02, 2015
It's like the bubble from Oz the Great and Powerful! Amazing writing so far...