Never Let Me Go Billionaire :*

Never Let Me Go Billionaire :*

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mehtasrk By mehtasrk Updated Mar 17, 2013

One day..
One coffee..
One fine day Elena crashes into the richest person on earth and blames him for the coffee drooling over her shirt.Ross's ego is hurted when Elena dosen't give a damn about his looks.When Elena goes for interview.She realises Ross is her new boss the richest person on earth.Ross makes it his goal to trouble her secetary so much that she will have to bend on her knees.While the long journey they both start having a connection.Maybe a connection of LOVE.

    I would have started laughing to myself really quietly bc that's what I do when I'm mad
    mimimeyo mimimeyo May 13
    I'm getting confused here. The POVs are all mixed up.  Clearly from the narrator's POV.
    Aliannajeff Aliannajeff Feb 08
    I'd be screaming at him! Not hugging him! Let me at him!! Err
    GuitarGirl7607 GuitarGirl7607 Jun 27, 2015
    Umm just asking, what does he mean by "melted up"? And what's with his obsession with ice?
    Lorybird Lorybird Aug 19, 2014
    You keep switching between 1st and 3rd person commit to one please it makes the story flow much smoother
    MY_ANAC0NDA_DONT MY_ANAC0NDA_DONT Apr 11, 2014
    it would be better if ross talked 4 himself and not 
                                   let the narrator talk 4 him