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Running Away From Love Chapter 1 (On Hold)

Running Away From Love Chapter 1 (On Hold)

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Nicole By littleme1824 Updated Jan 17, 2011

Angelina Jackson runs away from her abusive pack in Oklahoma, where her brother is the alpha, and goes to California. There she meets Jonathan, the hottest guy she had ever seen. Jonathan is the sweetest guy in the world, and just happens to be her mate. After a month of being together the violence starts. Angelina once again leaves. She decides to go to school, where she meets the hot surfer boy who is determined to become friends with the mysterious new girl. Angelina starts to wonder why she feels so attracted to Nathan, and she starts to fall for her family's sworn enemy. A human.

cdownum cdownum Mar 16, 2013
It is a really good start. It has excitement and love. It really a bueatiful start.
This is a great start!
                              But I wouldn't have let the brother le her go free, I would have made her escape. lol Your grammar is good and spelling is not a issue.
                              I love it :D