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Mr Right

Mr Right

16.8K Reads 514 Votes 13 Part Story
Lil_minnie_mouse By Lil_minnie_mouse Updated Aug 16, 2015

hey guys so am writing for the first time so bear with me

Layshia000 Layshia000 Apr 21
I like it you just gotta check over your work for errors before putting it out and be more specific with who's saying what.
Kweenrookie Kweenrookie Aug 26, 2016
The grammar and spelling is making it hard for me to continue reading
ForeverLoved1234x ForeverLoved1234x May 28, 2016
Can u like put some periods or some spaces in this i can barely undrstand dis
McKenzie_100 McKenzie_100 Sep 26, 2016
U need to spell and correct ur grammar  plz I was reading this but too much mistakes
Queen1lala Queen1lala May 29, 2016
i cant tell who saying what put in some " " cause girl you got a sistah confuse lol anyway its pretty good