hey guys so am writing for the first time so bear with me
I like it you just gotta check over your work for errors before putting it out and be more specific with who's saying what.
The grammar and spelling is making it hard for me to continue reading
Can u like put some periods or some spaces in this i can barely undrstand dis
U need to spell and correct ur grammar plz I was reading this but too much mistakes
i cant tell who saying what put in some " " cause girl you got a sistah confuse lol anyway its pretty good