Ok, its revised. There may be a few mistakes, Ill go over them later. This was made up on the spot, and I don't have time for editing now. I will indrotuce the characters pertaining to the next chapter then, too (:
no, theres more to it in the next chapter. yea, i do proof, but sometimes me AND my computer don't catch it. anyway, thanx for commenting! means alot!
Omg was this inspired bi blak dawn ? I havnt read it yet cuz I'm a bout to faint in a few minutes due to sleep deprivation .. But I will later!
thanx @PGEchic ! yea, my spell check was acting up and wouldn't work,lol. but yea, there will be a twist. i still workeing on it.
Ohk so I read it and you should probably proofread before you post. But it's good so far. I hope there is some dramatic twist because so far it seems like all the other vampire/slave stories on here so far. But I really shouldn't pass judgement yet it's only a prologue.
hey, thanks @MikeJPW i had some idea's about that i'm gonna explain through Elizabeth in the next chapter.
ya, i had to clean my turtle tank so i couldn't write as much as i wanted,thanx! @dija09