Kashav[#Wattys2016]

Kashav[#Wattys2016]

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AmbrosialGlance By AmbrosialGlance Completed

That time when you all been caressed by your parents I'm the one who was kicked out.That time when you all been bloomed in your teens I shrank to abide the arduous life.But when someone came made me feel now I could take my heels up and twirl on my toes with my arms outspread to let the beams of joy for the first time bestowed on me,then the same one close to my heart twinged bringing me back where I was.......
           The Beautiful cover above is made by Me :)!

Thank u soo much.And yeah I'll try to improve cover n if u know about anyone making good covers please suggest me.Thanks again for giving my book your precious time.
darkShadowOwner darkShadowOwner Jun 10, 2015
Your writing skills are amazing and they made me feel really sad I'm glad I read this chapter and keep up the good work you have all my support darling just don't make me cry much more
AmbrosialGlance AmbrosialGlance Apr 02, 2015
@BarbaraSchermerhorn Thnx! I'll definitely try to add what u said.:-)Thnx once again
BarbaraSchermerhorn BarbaraSchermerhorn Apr 02, 2015
You should try adding a little more description, what does she think? how does the atmosphere feel? what does the scene look like? things like that. Its a wonderful plot though! Very interesting :)
MuciaBrooke MuciaBrooke Feb 27, 2015
U you are putting too much time into what they're saying, try to add some more detail. I'm a first time writer too.
AmbrosialGlance AmbrosialGlance Jan 05, 2015
hey I am really thankful to sajan77 and malalafan for commenting on my book.