What happens when the one you love doesn't believe in love?
omg i love it. its so good, you are a great writer. you should write more
I feel bad for the guy. She's so feelingless :(
like the detail with which you write and very different and unique story line. Btw nice touch in using brackets for dialogues :)
@nicollettenikki yeah. I didnt think it was fair for him as I was writing it. But I guess I made him too stubborn and he wouldn't give up on changing her. If anything was going to come out of this relationship.... I guess thats up to ur imagination. ;) thanks again for the comment. =)
Wow she was bitter, and dysfunctional.. this really gave off an interesting view and I felt bad for her man throughout this story.. Was anything good every going to come out of them..? This was once again another impressive piece from you..
@AutumnRain Its okay no need for you to apology on my behalf for it was my mistake.. So no worries..
@nicollettenikki oh... sorry for my rudeness then XD oh gosh i feel so stupid now. typos are bad. Sorry!