Take a left up ahead

Take a left up ahead

646 Reads 11 Votes 9 Part Story
Bella By futuresc Updated Oct 08, 2011

Addy Zayd is going on vacation. ..A couple of weeks at the  cottage with her family and the Hale's. The family they've known for years. She'll be driving down with an evil incarnate... Meeting  a couple new people... And maybe, just maybe, finding something she didnt intend to find when she left.  No problem. Just keep in mind Addy, love and hate are very similar emotions... OH and one more thing, MURDER DOES'NT SOLVE ANYTHING!

achat1992 achat1992 Mar 22, 2011
Haha, annoying little brothers. Can't live with them, can't live without them :)
achat1992 achat1992 Mar 22, 2011
Aside from a few grammatical errors, great start. The main character's voice definitely comes out well through your writing :) Reading on.